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haha XD
anyway, this is really cool and u did a really neat job on this! i like it a lot! awesome job on the details and colours, effects etc...the whole thing is awesome!!
aawwww~~for rachel...?
ah~nevermind then
As you asked for advanced critique, i'll try to pint out one or two things that catched my eye.
The city lights are looking a bit blurry and too big to me. But i'm not sure if they're supposed to be city lights, they look like it to me. Tell me if i'm wrong
The planet's outer glow is looking a bit strange, the strong orange does not fit very well.
You could try to smooth the nebula a bit more, especially the edges. Try to make a smoother transmission to the dark space, it's looking a bit like put in front of space, not like it's in space.
Sorry for my bad english, hope you got me