So far so good, I like the mood and colors. Drawing people is incredibly annoying, I find that unless I use a reference for them I basically can't draw them at all. The doctor (?) in the image could benefit from a bit of work with a reference; his body shape seems a bit off and it is different enough from the rest of the image to be noticeable. The desk looks awesome, I love the detail work there. I think that the room needs to look more like it's being lit by that lamp on the wall (which looks awesome by the way), maybe up the contrast a bit to give it a more mysterious feeling (no idea if that's appropriate though, since I don't know the story).

Of course, I need to rate this with stars, and because they're basically arbitrary categories I'm not really sure how to use them here. Vision? I don't really know where this is going. Originality? Not very original, but that doesn't really matter
Technique isn't bad, but this could use a bit more refinement. Impact for me is the biggest one here, I'm very intrigued and want to see more.

The stars don't really reflect this but I like this a lot.