So far so good, I like the mood and colors. Drawing people is incredibly annoying, I find that unless I use a reference for them I basically can't draw them at all. The doctor (?) in the image could benefit from a bit of work with a reference; his body shape seems a bit off and it is different enough from the rest of the image to be noticeable. The desk looks awesome, I love the detail work there. I think that the room needs to look more like it's being lit by that lamp on the wall (which looks awesome by the way), maybe up the contrast a bit to give it a more mysterious feeling (no idea if that's appropriate though, since I don't know the story).
Of course, I need to rate this with stars, and because they're basically arbitrary categories I'm not really sure how to use them here. Vision? I don't really know where this is going. Originality? Not very original, but that doesn't really matter
Technique isn't bad, but this could use a bit more refinement. Impact for me is the biggest one here, I'm very intrigued and want to see more.
The stars don't really reflect this but I like this a lot.
This is good shit right here, bro.
Thanks a lot for the crits, tips and compliments. I will without a doubt try to make this better after this
I'm happy that this made you feel like wanting more and I'll probably try to change some things and update it.
Again, thanks for the crit, it was needed!
(Also, yes, that is a doctor )